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Impression Point: 2 Blogs (500-600 words each), July 18th 2024
Copywriting - Blog Post
Sam reviewed Emily
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Copywriting
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Emily
Copywriting
Hey Emily, nice work here overall for the first time working on a project with us for this client. A few items we'd like to see improved for next time:
-Overall tone of voice is a bit more robotic/stiff than what we'd like. Feel free to use more contractions - "it's" instead of "it is", for example.
-There were a few instances of consecutive sentences repeating language. For example, "help" was used in back to back sentences here: "Targeted ads are great for businesses because they help eliminate customers who would not be interested in their product or service while catering more to those who would be. Targeted ads help businesses reach potential customers, increase brand awareness, and drive sales." Would love to see more engaging writing here to keep readers interested in learning more.
-Solid job on including SEO-optimized headings and some of the featured keywords from other blogs here.
-If possible, would love to see a bit more link density. Maybe 1 extra external and 1 extra internal link per blog than you have currently would work great.
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